chand karwa-chouth ka

[janumanu]

Na hi mere hath hinayee
Na ankhon mai kajal ki parchayee
Na mathey pe bindia ki dhanak
Na kalayee mai kanch ki khanak
Na shafak ka mang mai sindoor
Tum gaye kyu itni door

Aaj ka din suhag ka din
mere liye to daag ka din
Tum khabo mai aao to
Main neend mai hi banu dulhan
Apna sara badan mahkau
Choo ke tumahre hontho ka chandan
Par ab jo jaise bhi mujhe manzoor
Tum gaye kyu itni door


kaise batau kaise hai haalat mere
tumbin kaise kat-te hai din rat mere
mujeh aur tanha kar dete hai
log jo rahte hai sath mere
katl to tum kisi aur se hue
lahu se rang gaye kyu hath mere
aag lage ya na lage
sati hona bidhwa ka dastoor
tum gaye kyu itni door

bina aag ke jal rahi hu
jee nahi pall rahi hu
dekho kaisa hunar hai mujhme
laash hu fir bhi chal rahi hu
tum meri jawani ki sham ban gaye
mai suraj ban kar dhal rahi hu
ankh matha kabhi lab tumse
aise har chehre se bahal rahi hu
na bula saku,na tumhare paas aa sau
mai bhi kitni mazboor
tum gaye kyu itni door

kokh to meri bhari nahi
par goud mai apni bharti rahi hu
humare hi pyar sa dikhta hai
pyar mai usse karti rahi hu
mere zism ki upaj nahi magar
usse rooh ka rista rakhti hu
hone laga hai mujhko bhi
ma hone ka garoor
tum gaye kyu itni door

jaise tokte hai sab aansoo mere
kash tumhe bhi koe rokta
kyu aise jahaan gaye ho tum
jaha se koe nahi laut-ta
eid ka chand ho gaya
mera chand karwa-chouth ka
tum bin mai mari nahi
mera kasoor
tum gaye kyu itni door
TUM GAYE KYU ITNI DOOOR....................

[risky]

wah vikaaaaaaaaaaaaas wah aaj sawad kam par gayai tariff mein eteni umenda nazam or iteni lambi mager kaya sama bandha or kis khubsoorti se taraph or judayee ke peera ko kalam bandh kar pesh kiya hai kabilai tariff hai appenai aap mein mind blowing ek dam umenda .

[janumanu]

thanx bhayeee

[jassi]

bina piya ke chand bhi adhoora lagta ahi ro aise main kerwa chowth bhi adhoora ,,,,,wah vikas apne patiwarta anri ki jeeti jagti tasweer paish ki hai,,,,,bhut hi khoob,,,,:)

[mistifer21]

very nice compsition

[Princess]

I don't know how many times I have read this creation of yours Vikaas.. and have always gone away without reviewing ..maybe because it is too effective. It has always moistened my eyes. So without any words you can tell how effective the composition is.

Great achievement!!