my last composition & visit on this site..thanks to everyone.

[puneet narang]

Thanks to everybdy who so ever gave me their care & welcome to me here....thanks to everyone & specially to smone who spoil my life.........

Dard Jab Bhi Ubhare Mare Sine Main ,
Karar Tujhko Na Aaye Jine Main|

Gam Ka Pahaar Tujhpe Toote Iss Kadar,
Umra Kat Jaye Aansoo Pine Main|

Maut Maange magar Tujhe Maut Na Mile,
Jindagi Bojh Lagne Lage, Tujhe Jine Main|

Tu Chahkar Bhi Kisi Ki Ho Na Sake,
Jaise Angoothi Hoti Hai, Nagine Main|

Tu Tarpe To, Dard Aaisi Uthe,
Jaisi Uthati Hai, Aaj Mere Sine Main|

Dard Jab Bhi Ubhare Mare Sine Main ,
Karar Tujhko Na Aaye, Jine Main||


good bye to everyone.....regards..

[mistifer21]

Thanks to everybdy who so ever gave me their care & welcome to me here....thanks to everyone & specially to smone who spoil my life.........

Dard Jab Bhi Ubhare Mare Sine Main ,
Karar Tujhko Na Aaye Jine Main|

Gam Ka Pahaar Tujhpe Toote Iss Kadar,
Umra Kat Jaye Aansoo Pine Main|

Maut Maange magar Tujhe Maut Na Mile,
Jindagi Bojh Lagne Lage, Tujhe Jine Main|

Tu Chahkar Bhi Kisi Ki Ho Na Sake,
Jaise Angoothi Hoti Hai, Nagine Main|

Tu Tarpe To, Dard Aaisi Uthe,
Jaisi Uthati Hai, Aaj Mere Sine Main|

Dard Jab Bhi Ubhare Mare Sine Main ,
Karar Tujhko Na Aaye, Jine Main||


good bye to everyone.....regards..

puneet ji
aake dard ko dekhkar hum bhi ro diye
sach aise hi dil se dua bad-dua ke roop mein nikalti hai
lekin dost bad-dua mein toh dua hoti hai

apna khayal rakhna
nira

[jassi]

Thanks to everybdy who so ever gave me their care & welcome to me here....thanks to everyone & specially to smone who spoil my life.........

Dard Jab Bhi Ubhare Mare Sine Main ,
Karar Tujhko Na Aaye Jine Main|

Gam Ka Pahaar Tujhpe Toote Iss Kadar,
Umra Kat Jaye Aansoo Pine Main|

Maut Maange magar Tujhe Maut Na Mile,
Jindagi Bojh Lagne Lage, Tujhe Jine Main|

Tu Chahkar Bhi Kisi Ki Ho Na Sake,
Jaise Angoothi Hoti Hai, Nagine Main|

Tu Tarpe To, Dard Aaisi Uthe,
Jaisi Uthati Hai, Aaj Mere Sine Main|

Dard Jab Bhi Ubhare Mare Sine Main ,
Karar Tujhko Na Aaye, Jine Main||


good bye to everyone.....regards..

hmmmmm

puneet ji,,,,kafi der se paki likhi hui ye poem padh rehi thi,,,,,kafi acha likha hai ji isme,,,kafi derd b hai ji,,,,,derd ko kafi ubara b hai ji,,,dil se dad qabool kijiye

[risky]

puneet mere bhai aaj yah kah ke dard or na ubaraoo hl per ke aap ke yah akheri kalam hogi or good bye ya bye bye no aager tum dard samenjetai hoo humain yoen chor kar forum se na jayengai mere bhai aap ke khushi bhi sath hai or dard bhi hamarai sath rahega akelai nahi plz yah meri gujarish hai stay here with us .

tum mom ko pigalenai se haar maan bethai ho
soona hai sachai ashiq toh pather ko pigal diya karetai hai

[mistifer21]

puneet mere bhai aaj yah kah ke dard or na ubaraoo hl per ke aap ke yah akheri kalam hogi or good bye ya bye bye no aager tum dard samenjetai hoo humain yoen chor kar forum se na jayengai mere bhai aap ke khushi bhi sath hai or dard bhi hamarai sath rahega akelai nahi plz yah meri gujarish hai stay here with us .

tum mom ko pigalenai se haar maan bethai ho
soona hai sachai ashiq toh pather ko pigal diya karetai hai

puneet ji

bhaiya ke saath meri bhi guzarish hai plz aap pariwar ko chor kar naa jao.

hum sub aapke saath hain.

nira

[Princess]

Running away from Sorrows and grief does not take the pain away Punneet.
You are a very strong person and we are all here to support you and take you through this difficult time of yours.

Please do not give up hope. Stay with the family and you will find yourself among those that love you and want to help you get your happiness back.

Bt the way, you really wrote with hearty feelings and emotions. Dil ko choo gaya... it is really very emotional and touching but please apnon ko kabhi badduwa nahin dete
Dena hai to sirf duwa hi do..waise tere har sher mein duwa bhi nazar aa raha hai... but in pain.
Hope you will stay with us and let us drown your sorrows.