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Princess
12-06-2007, 07:52 AM
YAAD KARTA HOON TUMHEIN

Yaad Karta Hoon Tumhein Yaad Aati Hi Nahi
Kaise Aaye Woh Cheez Jo Jati Hi Nahi

Tum mujhe bhool bhi jaao to ye haq hai tumko
Meri baat aur hai maine to mohabbat hai ki

Judai ka pata hota agar pyaar se pehle
To maut ki duwa mangte hum deedar se pehle

Peete hain sharaab hum jinhe bhulane ke liye
wo hi aa jaate hain yaad hamein rulane ke liye

Manzilon pe aake lutay hain dilon ke karvaan
Kashtiyan sahil pe aake doobti hain pyar ki

Benaam Sa Ye Dard Thehar Q Nahi Jata
Jo Beet Gaya Hai Woh Guzar Jata Kyon Nahi

Sab Kuch To Hai Kya Dhundti Rehti Hai Nigaahein
Kya Baat Hai Mai Waqt Pe Ghar Jata Kyon Nahi

Woh Naam Jo Na Jane Kab Se, Na Chehra Na Badan Hai
Woh Khawaab Agar Hai To Bikhar Jata Kyon Nahi

Not Mine

Babydoll
12-14-2007, 11:52 PM
di i think ye sare two liner shayris hai na.. sirf last ke 3 sher ek ghazal se hai..

correct me if i m wrong..

Princess
12-15-2007, 12:01 AM
You know shayaris more than me... how can you be wrong?

Babydoll
12-15-2007, 12:32 AM
hmmmm yeah :)

Princess
12-15-2007, 12:42 AM
Actually I was also thinking that but maybe the person was writing something and it ended up being a gazal at the end... i just liked it.. so shared it

Babydoll
12-15-2007, 12:55 AM
oww i see.. no p di.. hota hai hota hai aisa bhi hota hai ... :P

Princess
12-15-2007, 01:04 AM
:)

Actually I had wanted to change the write and convert it to a proper poem... but didn't have the time...
:D

Babydoll
12-15-2007, 01:06 AM
Lo half of yr work is done :)

Benaam Sa Ye Dard, Thehar Kyon Nahi Jata,
Jo Beet Gaya Hai, Woh Guzar Kyon Nahi Jata---

Sab Kuch To Hai, Kya Dhundti Rahti Hai Nigahe,
Kya Baat Hai Main Waqt Pe Ghar Kyon Nahi Jata-

Woh Ek Hi Chera To, Nahi Sare Jahan Mein,
Jo Dur Hai Woh Dil Se Utar Kyon Nahi Jata

Main Apni Hi Uljhi Hui Raho Ka Tamasha,
Jate Hain Jidhar Sab, Main Udhar Kyon Nahi Jata,

Kisi kay kho janay ka Dar kion nahin jata ...
.yeh bojh mery Dil say utar kion nahin jata.......

Manzail pay poohanch kay bhi usy khona paray ga ...
yeh tay hay too phir shooq-e-safar kion nahin jata?

Princess
12-15-2007, 01:18 AM
No wonderrr ... hehehe