Tere bina wadiyaN bhi khizan se hai

[risky]

sabhi dostoN ko risky ka pyar bahara salam namestai sat sri akal mein ek week hill sataion per thaa or wahan ek sham ik jagah beth kar kuch khyal man mein aayai jise aap ke sath shar kar raha hoon passend aayai toh batana

Tere bina wadiyaN bhi khizan se hai
Zindgi mano ek lageti sangeen gunah se hai

Na janai kaisa lag raha hai wadiyon ka mausam
Har pata har dalee mano karah se rahee hai

Har alam birangi ka sa lag raha hai
Khamosiyan bhi aaj cherti mujhe hai

Saza bane jaise sans laina meri hai
Luv khamosh hai dil mein uthetai sawal hai

Seena mein utheti ek aah se hai
Kaya tumhai aab halai dil batayai
Kyoen har saih meri zindgi ke hue gumrah se hai

[Princess]

The feelings of empitiness and loneliness can easily be seen in this poem of yours Anu.

But then anyone will get lost in such a lovely place where nothing else but the scenario matters and says a lot.

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it;s a beautiful place aisi jagah pe toh akele mein hi jaana chaahungi main bhi

[risky]

The feelings of empitiness and loneliness can easily be seen in this poem of yours Anu.

But then anyone will get lost in such a lovely place where nothing else but the scenario matters and says a lot.


thanks for nice review

[risky]

it;s a beautiful place aisi jagah pe toh akele mein hi jaana chaahungi main bhi


jheli kalam ke barai mein bhi kuch review deti kaise thee :)

[Babydoll]

Bohot khub anil..bade ache se apne apne sunepan ko express kiya hai..aur insaan aksar aisi hi aalam me khud ko tanha pata hai chahe wo kitni hi bheed me kyu na ho per aksar apne mehboob ko aise hi mausam me talash karta hai..

keep it up