Aey Zindagi Ab Tere...

[Babydoll]

Kaash anil ke liye yaha apni kuch pichli poems post kar rahi hu jin pe unke comments nahi mile the jo mere liye kaafi maine rakhte hai kyunki anil hamesha sahi review dete hai meri poem pe :)

Aey Zindagi ab tere hath aana kuch nahi
Naam ke hai sare rishte yaha dostana kuch nahi

Fareb se bhare hai sab ke dil
Nafrat bhari hai har nazar
Khelte hai sab rishto se
Yaha sath nibhana kuch nahi

Maa baap ki kadar kisne ki
kaun jane pyar bhai bahen ka
Sab apni ziist me khoye hai
Apno pe jaan lutana kuch nahi

Banta hai mazaak sachai ka
Jauth pe jaan chidakte hai
Bhulaye baithe hai es haqiqat ko
Ke qabr me sand aana kuch nahi

[Princess]

Tere bhai ne to nahi comments ki... I hope you dont mind mine...

Ouch This is the devil inhumanity that you wrote about.
And it really touched my heart.
Fortunately it's not present everywhere. Good still prevails in a lot of hearts.
Well written Dolly.

[risky]

Kaash anil ke liye yaha apni kuch pichli poems post kar rahi hu jin pe unke comments nahi mile the jo mere liye kaafi maine rakhte hai kyunki anil hamesha sahi review dete hai meri poem pe :)

Aey Zindagi ab tere hath aana kuch nahi
Naam ke hai sare rishte yaha dostana kuch nahi

kamo sahee kaha hai acha nazeriya raha

Fareb se bhare hai sab ke dil
Nafrat bhari hai har nazar
Khelte hai sab rishto se
Yaha sath nibhana kuch nahi

bahoot khoob yah baat samenj jayai sab toh bat kuch alag hoo

Maa baap ki kadar kisne ki
kaun jane pyar bhai bahen ka
Sab apni ziist me khoye hai
Apno pe jaan lutana kuch nahi

mind blowing dil ko chue gaya or eahsash ko bakhubi samenj bhi gaya

Banta hai mazaak sachai ka
Jauth pe jaan chidakte hai
Bhulaye baithe hai es haqiqat ko
Ke qabr me sand aana kuch nahi
yah janatai bhi ke meethi ke gharondaon ke vashindai hai ek deen fer eash meeti mein mil mast ho jana koen yah sab bhool jatai hai hum

aap ke yah rachen yah kosish bahoot he eahsash or meaning fool rahee ek achi feelings ko nayaw andaz mein kalam band kar ru ba ru karenai kai liyai dil se daad deta hoon kuch dare se jaroor review kiya mager jo kiya dil se kiya

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harr aaine k do pehlu hote hain kammo

waise kavita achhi hai par bohot cynical hai sachayi hai iss mein magar sirf aadhi

hats off great writing as always

[Babydoll]

Tere bhai ne to nahi comments ki... I hope you dont mind mine...

Ouch This is the devil inhumanity that you wrote about.
And it really touched my heart.
Fortunately it's not present everywhere. Good still prevails in a lot of hearts.
Well written Dolly.

Chalo bhai na sahi bahen ne to commnts de diya wahi bohot hai :)

haa shayad abhi tak achai hogi baaki per mera saamna ho burai se hi hua hai ab tak to achai pe no commnets :D

[Babydoll]

aap ke yah rachen yah kosish bahoot he eahsash or meaning fool rahee ek achi feelings ko nayaw andaz mein kalam band kar ru ba ru karenai kai liyai dil se daad deta hoon kuch dare se jaroor review kiya mager jo kiya dil se kiya


aap ke sahi review ki humne hamesha kadar ki hai..shukriya

[Babydoll]

harr aaine k do pehlu hote hain kammo

waise kavita achhi hai par bohot cynical hai sachayi hai iss mein magar sirf aadhi

hats off great writing as always


arps puri sachai se jis din waqef ho jaungi pakka us pe likh dungi per ye daawa hai ke sachai kabhi mujhse nahi milegi :D

thanks for reading me honey

[suhani]

Zindagi ko bas ek nazariya se nahi dekhni Chahiye ..
Everything in This World HAs A Positive & a Negative Side..
...Sachai Aur Achai Dono milenge Tumhe agar dundne ki koshish karo tab...... :)
Hence.....
Very WEll Written babby doll..!! :)