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risky
11-14-2007, 10:38 AM
Mere ander bhi burai raheti hai
Per iteni bhi nahi jitena tune kaha bura muje
Maana toot gayai har taar rishetai ke tuj sang
Per jitena bewaffa samenja hai mein utena bhi nahi
Fer kiss baat ka gila karai aab
Tere saffer mein aab mere kadam ab sath rahai na
Tera mera risheta hee toota hai
Jab teri manzil per khich gayee lakeer mere naam per
Tu ush manjil se kinara karena he baheter hai

Princess
11-14-2007, 10:45 AM
It is normally said that if you criticise someone about a character that character is usually inherited in you.

An unusual write from you Anu but it portrays the depth of emotions.

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11-14-2007, 10:52 AM
tumse toh achhi shayari ki umeed hi hoti hai hamesha veere
missed urs shers...nice to see such depth and structured writing again

risky
11-15-2007, 10:59 AM
thanks madhoo and arpu mein shayri nahi janeta likhena bas dil mein jo khyal aatai hai unhai apeni style mein kalam band kar pesh kareta hoon or aap ka pyar hai jo mere eash kosish ko har dam agai barenai ka pyar deta hai

Babydoll
11-20-2007, 12:17 AM
mujhe nahi pata mujhe yaha kya kehna chahiye..sirf kalam ki tarif karu ya sahi maane me ese samju...