Kanton bhari bagiya mein

[risky]

Respected admin kams & super mod madhoo yah meri akheri post hogi aager aap shayeri thread ko seprate nahi banayai gai toh. Meri samenj nahi aa raha ke admin or super mod yah thread koen chit chat mein rakhena chahetai hai.

Kanton bhari bagiya mein
Fool choenai ke tayari mein
Pata nahi kitena royai
Hashenai ke tayri mein

SapenoN ke wo satrangi duniya
Janai kaha goom hue
Badela hawaon ne rukh
Andhi anai ke tayari mein


Vidhi ka vidhan bhala
Kiski samenj mein aaya hai
Aaj ka astitav mit chala
Kal Risky honai ke tayari mein

[°┌●ùñïQùề.5åbåN●┐°]

bohot khoob veere

veere ek cheez explain karun ....supermods subforums ki location nahin change kar sakde ae kamm sirf aur sirf admin kar sakda ae te jekar admin hi nitt nahin aunda fer thoda ku time ta laggu tera kamm hon ch na...sakh rakh ho jauga eme senti na ho

(supermods subforums ki location nahin change kar sakte yeh kaan sirf aur sirf admin kar sakta hai aur agar admin hi roz na aaiye toh thoda time toh laggega aapka kaam hone mein...thodi patience rakho, zyada emotional na ho)

[Princess]

Nice....

Wow.. My Guddi has really matured now. God bless you.

[risky]

ok mein wait karoo ga but kalam ko kalam ke tarah par kar review diya karai aager aap chahetai hai ke hum jaise kuch likh kar aap se ru ba ru kalam ko karwayai toh kam se kam review thora feel kar kai diya karoo warena hamara likhenai ka intrest khatam ho jata hai

[°┌●ùñïQùề.5åbåN●┐°]

Nice....

Wow.. My Guddi has really matured now. God bless you.


experience is the best teacher i'm moderator on a couple of other forums mujhe pata hai kaun kya kar sakta hai aur kya nahin aur harr cheez hone mein time chahiye..

ek baat batao didi aapki shayari nahin nazar aa rahi.... :confused:


waise veere yeh bohot hi nice likha hai aapne keep writing

[°┌●ùñïQùề.5åbåN●┐°]

ok mein wait karoo ga but kalam ko kalam ke tarah par kar review diya karai aager aap chahetai hai ke hum jaise kuch likh kar aap se ru ba ru kalam ko karwayai toh kam se kam review thora feel kar kai diya karoo warena hamara likhenai ka intrest khatam ho jata hai
yes boss sahi kaha aapne :D aagay se dihaan rahega

[Princess]

ek baat batao didi aapki shayari nahin nazar aa rahi.... :confused:

I will try to write..but Kuch waqt lagega Arps... I might post some old ones..haven't written for some time now :(

[Babydoll]

wow..bohot hi badhiya likha hai anil..just too good