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Princess
11-16-2007, 07:01 PM
Baithi hoon liye dilme armaan hazaar
Chhayi hai betabi aur dil hai beqaraar

Chip gaya hai mera Chaand na jane kin ghataon mein
Chaadn sitaron ne bhi unka nahi kiya hai deedaar

Kis moD par le ayi hai ye ghadi kaisa hai ye aalam
Kyoun uth raha hai ab zindagi se aitbaar

Choti si ahat pe bhi jhoom uthta hai ye pagal dil
Ki aa gaya hai wo jiska kar rahi hoon mai intezaar

Baithi hoon ab bhi aas liye raah par ankh bichaye
Dil mein hai betaabi aur ankhon mein pyar beshumaar

risky
11-17-2007, 02:16 PM
Baithi hoon liye dilme armaan hazaar
Chhayi hai betabi aur dil hai beqaraar

Chip gaya hai mera Chaand na jane kin ghataon mein
Chaadn sitaron ne bhi unka nahi kiya hai deedaar

Kis moD par le ayi hai ye ghadi kaisa hai ye aalam
Kyoun uth raha hai ab zindagi se aitbaar

Choti si ahat pe bhi jhoom uthta hai ye pagal dil
Ki aa gaya hai wo jiska kar rahi hoon mai intezaar

Baithi hoon ab bhi aas liye raah par ankh bichaye
Dil mein hai betaabi aur ankhon mein pyar beshumaar

aaj ek bahoot antral ke baad shayri dhek raha hoon aap ke kalam se nikeli hue kaya kahoon aaj sawad nahi bas ek sher pesh kar raha hoon

Arzoo-e-dil ne hamey diwana bana diya,
Roye na theh kabhi, aap ne rula diya,
Hum ne toh har waqt yaad kiya,
Lekin aap neh yaad karte karte zamana laga diya.

Babydoll
11-18-2007, 12:57 AM
aap ko phir se likhta dekh bohot khushi huwi di..aur aap ki urdu pehle se kaafi behta rho gayi hai u hv improved alot..

bohot hi acha likha hai di.. keep writing :)

vinnie_sneha
12-04-2007, 03:25 PM
hey princess..grt work :)

Princess
12-06-2007, 07:55 AM
Thanks for reading and showing appreciation, Anil, Dolly and Neha.
Dolly thanks a lot for the compliment. I still have a lot to learn.
I have written a few more but don't like it yet..thay need amending..so will post after I am satisfied :)

ajay
01-07-2008, 07:45 PM
HASARAT TO YEHI THI KI TERE KADMON MEIN MERA DUM NIKLE.
MAGAR BEWAFA TUM NAHIN YAAR BADKISMAT HUM NIKALE.

Princess
03-07-2008, 03:40 AM
Teri chahat ab ek yaad banke rah gayi hai
Mohobbat ab taDapne ki buniyaad ban gayi hai