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mistifer21
11-17-2007, 11:10 AM
Bezuban

Shabdon ne diya naa saath rahe be-zubaaN banker
Dil ki hasroton ne pa liya mukaam be-zubaaN banker

Apne begane ka koyee nahee tha hameiN ilm yahaaN
Duniya kee ho gayee hai ab pahchaan be-zubaN bankar

Hazar zubanoN kee ladayaee rahee thee Umra bhar
Sabhi ban gaye haiN ab hamzubaN bezubaaN bankar

ChahatoN ko naa badha.o is tarah ai mere humnashieN
Kuch kahe bina ruksat ho jayega karhaaN be-zuban bankar

Dil ki dadkan ko dadakne do ai khuda kucthh is tarah .
Khud hi samajh jayeNge hum yahaaN be-zuban bankar

Dil kee baat kabhee hum keh hi na sake abhi tak
Pahuch gaye aaj is tarah shamshan bezuban bankar

Dil ki hasroton ne paya mukaam be-zubaan bankar,
Mere AhsaasoN ko mil gayee ab zubaN bezuban bankar

Nira

risky
11-17-2007, 02:05 PM
superb ek ek share appenai mein bahoot kuch kah gaya nira bahoot umenda andaz se ek eahsash ko kalam bandh kiya hai or ush se achi baat ke ush mein rythem ko jis tarah se kayam kiya woh eashai ek achai gazal ka roop deti hai god bless you

Princess
11-17-2007, 05:14 PM
Wow Nira... An awesome gazal. Loved each line.
Such a lovely creation. Read it three times... Jut superb!!
You deserve points for this.

vinnie_sneha
12-04-2007, 03:24 PM
Bezuban

Shabdon ne diya naa saath rahe be-zubaaN banker
Dil ki hasroton ne pa liya mukaam be-zubaaN banker

Apne begane ka koyee nahee tha hameiN ilm yahaaN
Duniya kee ho gayee hai ab pahchaan be-zubaN bankar

Hazar zubanoN kee ladayaee rahee thee Umra bhar
Sabhi ban gaye haiN ab hamzubaN bezubaaN bankar

ChahatoN ko naa badha.o is tarah ai mere humnashieN
Kuch kahe bina ruksat ho jayega karhaaN be-zuban bankar

Dil ki dadkan ko dadakne do ai khuda kucthh is tarah .
Khud hi samajh jayeNge hum yahaaN be-zuban bankar

Dil kee baat kabhee hum keh hi na sake abhi tak
Pahuch gaye aaj is tarah shamshan bezuban bankar

Dil ki hasroton ne paya mukaam be-zubaan bankar,
Mere AhsaasoN ko mil gayee ab zubaN bezuban bankar

Nira

:) veryy nice nira