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Princess
11-18-2007, 10:01 AM
The sky is dark and there is rolling thunder
Heavy droplets fall as I let my brain wonder
Lovely wishful thoughts run across my mind
Is this the day, Is he the one I am going to find

Squeals of laughter, nearby do I hear
I see the children playing without fear
I watch them plying naked in the lake
Chewing on biscuits, some munching on cake

Reaching the garden of roses I look up at the sky
Seeing the deserted spot I say , "Why Oh Why?"
Why do I let this happen to me time and again
Why do I long for the impossible, why do I ask for pain

Leaving our meeting spot I walk in the cold rain
Crying with tears of sorrow as I ache with pain
The tears get mingled as I stagger across in vain
Unmindful of the squealing children playing in the rain

When I reach the graveyard, I call out his name
Take me with you as without you I am not the same
There is never a moment that tortures me so
This rain which I used to love torments me forever more

suhani
12-14-2007, 06:27 PM
Wow So expressive.. n sad.. Very Touching Princess :(
Very Well Written :)



The feeling of Sorrow Yet To be seen
The Aching Anguish,The Painful Grief Held Within
Another Misty Journey,Yet to be unfolded
Where The Hidden Covert Remains Untold...

Princess
12-14-2007, 11:14 PM
Thanks a lot for reading dear. And I love the verse you have given.

A sorrow is a deep feeling from within which is not so easy to see and takes you to measures which one didn't think of.